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Re: Runner
Running. The slapping sound that dirty white sneakers make when they strike wet pavement. The cold feeling that I get when the rain hits my hands and face. The fire ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Thanksgiving
This is a decent story, and has a lot of potential to become a good one. That being said, there are some things that need to be worked on before ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Looking for a good book?
A Ring of Endless Light- Madeline L'Engle Startide Rising- David Brin Ringworld- Larry Niven It- Stephen King A Wrinkle in Time- Madeline L'Engle The Alienist- Caleb Carr The Mist- Stephen ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: When do you write?
I would have to say that I write the best in the evenings, though I am not bound to that time. Sometimes if it's just a good day I may ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Do any make you nauseous?
The Mist, especially the end of it. First time it's ever happened to me with a movie.
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Ideas & Inspirations
Where I get my ideas and inspiration is a fluid thing that often is never the same twice. It might be a sentence, a title, a book I've read, or ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Anyone seen the Indiana Jones movie 'The crystal skulls'
About the crystal being non-magnetic, they pointed that out during the movie, as I recall, when they said that gold also was non-magnetic.
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: List of taboo writing words
zestfully I cannot stand that word. Read a book once in which it was used a lot. And by a lot I mean, A LOT. Now I get the shudders ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Air Born
This has the potential to be a good story. In order to reach that point you're going to have to change a few things. First off, description. You need to ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: The red eyes of a nightmare.
Very interesting story. The continual nightmare thing was a very good twist. I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors, so that's all right. It could do with a little ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Patriot
This is a very good story. You described everything very well and got us into the main character's head. Maybe a little more description could flesh it out a bit, ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Friends
This was good. It could have done with some more description, but since this is a flash fiction piece that can't really be held against it. It was comprehensible and ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Anyone seen the Indiana Jones movie 'The crystal skulls'
I don't really know what to think about it. It had all the action sequences I liked, including the required "fight with prominent henchman in small space resulting in gruesome ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: To have a market or not to have a market
When I write stories, I try to write them so that they are somewhat universally understandable. What I mean by that is even if you don't like horror, which I ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Swearing In Stories
Swearing in stories? I'm going to have to go with the majority here and say that I don't unless it's in dialogue or it's a first person narrative. And even ...
Jun 2, 2008
